No1,Kampung Teluk Kecil,
32300 Pulau Pangkor,
Perak.
19 January 2015
No7,Jalan Cenderawasih ,
Compony d`photographer shot,
31400 Shah Alam,Selangor.
Dear Sir/Madam
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF A PHOTOGRAPER
I would like to apply for this job as a photographer in the
company d`photographer shot
I am currently taking classes in photography , so I have some
background knowledge in this field . In the past I also been working for several companies .
I am prepared to be called up for an interview by the company
at any time convenient .Here is my resume that I attach it.I hope that my
application will receive a favourable reply from you.
Your Faithfully,
Salmina
NORSALMINA
BINTI KAMARUDDIN
Your Faithfully should be Yours Faithfully
ReplyDeleteok thanks
Deleteok nice song achik and nana...well done not bad meyna...
ReplyDeleteoh yeah!!!do i care...haha
Deleteno reciverce name ,...
ReplyDeleteorait....
DeleteAddress: There's no receivers name. Only Address.
ReplyDeleteOpening: where did you get the information?? (Jobstreet.my/Newspaper/Job Fest).
Content: Yes you have background knowledge in what?? photography is more complicated than you think. Please do your homework first.
Closure: Grammatical errors. Revise.
Overview: Fonts are misaligned (Some are small some are big). Add more points in self promoting and do some research in photography and editing.
thank you for your coment, I will take respon to your coment
DeleteJust want to say the song was nice
ReplyDeleteOh!!! i now....hahaha
DeleteYour Faithfully should be Yours Faithfully
ReplyDeletethanks for your coment
DeleteGood! just bold your name :)
ReplyDeleteokey...
Deleteplease use Arial 12...:-)
ReplyDeletechange Your faithfully to Yours faithfully and bold your name
ReplyDeleteBold your name okay ..
ReplyDeleteSalmina, you have spelled wrongly the word "PHOTOGRAHPER" in your subject line. Please write the receiver's address properly. Include the name/ position of the person you are writing to and name of the company. Please make sure that your skills related to the position applied. Do mention your education, experience and training received pertaining to the position applied. Please mention resume in your closing. Overall, okay!
ReplyDeleteassalamualaikum myna...you name should use bold okay...have a nice day <3 hahaha
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