Monday 26 January 2015

Week 4

No1,Kampung Teluk Kecil,
32300 Pulau Pangkor,
Perak.

19 January 2015

No7,Jalan Cenderawasih ,
Compony d`photographer shot,
31400 Shah Alam,Selangor.

Dear Sir/Madam

APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF A PHOTOGRAPER

I would like to apply for this job as a photographer in the company d`photographer shot

I am currently taking classes in photography , so I have some background knowledge in this field . In the past  I also been working for several companies .

I am prepared to be called up for an interview by the company at any time convenient .Here is my resume that I attach it.I hope that my application will receive a favourable reply from you.

Your Faithfully,
Salmina
NORSALMINA BINTI KAMARUDDIN

19 comments:

  1. Your Faithfully should be Yours Faithfully

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  2. ok nice song achik and nana...well done not bad meyna...

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  3. Address: There's no receivers name. Only Address.
    Opening: where did you get the information?? (Jobstreet.my/Newspaper/Job Fest).
    Content: Yes you have background knowledge in what?? photography is more complicated than you think. Please do your homework first.
    Closure: Grammatical errors. Revise.
    Overview: Fonts are misaligned (Some are small some are big). Add more points in self promoting and do some research in photography and editing.

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    1. thank you for your coment, I will take respon to your coment

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  4. Just want to say the song was nice

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  5. Your Faithfully should be Yours Faithfully

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  6. change Your faithfully to Yours faithfully and bold your name

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  7. Salmina, you have spelled wrongly the word "PHOTOGRAHPER" in your subject line. Please write the receiver's address properly. Include the name/ position of the person you are writing to and name of the company. Please make sure that your skills related to the position applied. Do mention your education, experience and training received pertaining to the position applied. Please mention resume in your closing. Overall, okay!

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  8. assalamualaikum myna...you name should use bold okay...have a nice day <3 hahaha

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